From 57b954f31f01015abe01aaf4e70a41f031a3eb7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Young <david@federated.computer>
Date: Tue, 27 Jun 2023 06:30:37 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] 6-27-23-1a

---
 data/hero.yml     | 4 ++--
 data/services.yml | 2 +-
 public/index.html | 6 +++---
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/data/hero.yml b/data/hero.yml
index ec3ff234..6196c54a 100644
--- a/data/hero.yml
+++ b/data/hero.yml
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ---
 enable: true
-title: $39 month. 100% private. Full support included. Incredible.
+title: $39 month. 100% private. Replace Google, Zoom, Slack, 1Password, Github, crappy VPN...
 caption: Federated Core
-description: Replace Dropbox, Google Workplace, Zoom, Slack, Airtable, Mailchimp, 1Password, Netlify, Github, Calendy, and your VPN for the low price of $39 a month. As many users as you want. Only pay for more storage when/if you need it.
+description: Great open-source replacements for Dropbox, Google Workplace, Zoom, Slack, Airtable, Mailchimp, 1Password, Netlify, Github, Calendy, your spying VPN and much more for the low price of $39 a month. As many users as you want. Only pay for more storage when/if you need it.
 buttonName: Available on
 button1text: Apple Store
 button2text: Google Play
diff --git a/data/services.yml b/data/services.yml
index eac35a47..0aeffa3d 100644
--- a/data/services.yml
+++ b/data/services.yml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 #  icons can be found on https://themify.me/themify-icons
 ---
 enable: true
-title: Federated Core is the complete offering for you
+title: Federated includes Human Support and full Backups. The benefits of self-hosting without the day-to-day high-stakes drudgery.
 services:
   - icon: ti-settings
     title: Support from People
diff --git a/public/index.html b/public/index.html
index 3234bd34..eacabf50 100644
--- a/public/index.html
+++ b/public/index.html
@@ -174,8 +174,8 @@
           <div class="col-lg-6 order-2 order-lg-1">
             <div class="hero-content">
               <span class="hero-content-subtitle"> Federated Core </span>
-              <h1> $39 month. 100% private. Full support included. Incredible. </h1>
-              <p> Replace Dropbox, Google Workplace, Zoom, Slack, Airtable, Mailchimp, 1Password, Netlify, Github, Calendy, and your VPN for the low price of $39 a month. As many users as you want. Only pay for more storage when/if you need it. </p>
+              <h1> $39 month. 100% private. Replace Google, Zoom, Slack, 1Password, Github, crappy VPN... </h1>
+              <p> Great open-source replacements for Dropbox, Google Workplace, Zoom, Slack, Airtable, Mailchimp, 1Password, Netlify, Github, Calendy, your spying VPN and much more for the low price of $39 a month. As many users as you want. Only pay for more storage when/if you need it. </p>
               
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
           <div class="col-lg-12">
             <div class="section-title">
               <h2>
-                Federated Core is the complete offering for you
+                Federated includes Human Support and full Backups. The benefits of self-hosting without the day-to-day high-stakes drudgery.
               </h2>
             </div>
           </div>