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data/landing.yaml

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ hero:
 
 
   title: "Federated Enterprise"
-  subtitle: Everything you need to know about Federated Computer's Enterprise offerings to help you bring the best open-source SaaS software to your customers.
+  subtitle: Everything you need to know about Federated Computer's Enterprise offerings designed to help you bring the best open-source SaaS software to your customers.
 
   image:
     path: "images" # path to image under configured assets directory. default 'images'
@@ -32,7 +32,8 @@ hero:
   ctaButton:
     icon: rocket_launch
     btnText: "Learn More"
-    url: "/docs/"
+    url: "/docs/overview/"
+
 #  cta2Button:
 #    icon: construction
 #    btnText: "Roadmap"
@@ -45,7 +46,7 @@ featureGrid:
   template: feature grid
 
   title: Why Choose Federated Computer?
-  subtitle: More and more these days, customers value privacy, value, and flexibility. Federated Computer helps you deliver on all three offering the best open source SaaS products on an easy-to-manage platform guaranteed to earn you great margins.
+  subtitle: More and more these days, customers value privacy, value, and flexibility. Federated Computer helps you deliver on all three. Now you can offer the best open source SaaS products on an easy-to-manage platform guaranteed to earn you great margins.
 
   items:
     - title: Fast
@@ -57,35 +58,35 @@ featureGrid:
 
     - title: Flexibility
       icon: settings
-      description: Your customers, your partners, and you are all to build the solutions paying customers want to differentiate their busineses. That's superior value.
+      description: Your customers, your partners, and you all building the solutions paying customers want for their busineses. That's superior value.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/
 
-    - title: Privacy
+    - title: Privacy & Security
       icon: lock
-      description: There's nothing "shared" in a Federated installation. Everything is specific to the customer.
+      description: There's nothing "shared" in a Federated installation. Everything is specific to the customer. Your customers achieve industry-leading privacy and security.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/
 
     - title: Unbeatable Profits
       icon: trending_up
-      description: Based on open source, our partners can deliver offerings that provide great value for customers and 80+% operating margins.
+      description: Based on open source, our partners deliver offerings that provide great value for customers and 80+% operating margins.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/
 
     - title: Up-to-Date Software
       icon: change_history
-      description: Built in to Federated Computer is a battle-tested system for keeping everything up-to-date and running smoothly.
+      description: Built in to Federated Computer is a battle-tested system for keeping everything up-to-date, patched, and running smoothly.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/
 
     - title: 24/7 Management
       icon: dark_mode
-      description: Our team and software platform ensure your offering runs without problems 24/7/365.
+      description: Our team and "intelligent" software platform ensure your offering runs without problems 24/7/365.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/
@@ -99,14 +100,14 @@ featureGrid:
 
     - title: Multilingual Support
       icon: translate
-      description: Our open source SaaS products are curated for those offering the most popular languages used by your customers and partners.
+      description: Federated Computer's curated open source SaaS products are curated for those offering the most popular languages used by your customers and partners.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/
 
     - title: Customizable
       icon: palette
-      description: Open source SaaS and workflows can be added to your offerings easily. You can define bundles of software and services for the best experience.
+      description: Additional open source SaaS and workflows can be added to your particular offerings easily. You can define bundles of software and services for the best experience and a differentiated product offering.
       ctaLink:
         text: learn more
         url: /docs/